This is a guest post from Kathryn Stucker. She would love to receive feedback about her first poem in the blogosphere. Enjoy.
My body was a temple
But now is a disaster.
It fails me from head to toe
As the years pass by faster.
Once I was so fleet of foot
And almost never fell down.
Now I’d better not try it –
I would surely break my crown.
I could bend and twist around,
Put my foot behind my head!
Now when I pull on my socks
A sharp pain fills me with dread.
I could throw a ball so far
That I was known for my arm.
But now I can’t toss a rock
To protect myself from harm.
I loved to climb the tall trees
And see the world from on high.
Now I’m glad when I don’t trip
On the bottom step – no lie!
I had a figure to show –
I wore a bright bikini.
Now the line from bust to thighs
Is more maxi than mini.
My long hair was golden blond
In the pageboy then in style.
Now still long but mostly white,
Atop my head in a pile.
My skin was so smooth and fair.
I was such a pretty bride.
Now I have wrinkles and spots
In places I cannot hide.
I won’t change anything though.
I’ve earned every lump and scar.
Take me as I am or not,
But I’ll take you as you are.
Kathryn Moore Stucker – 2014
Loved it 👍😃
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Great…she’ll be thrilled.
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I hope she’s still writing…
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She is.
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Did I overlook the link for Kathryn’s blog? I would love to read more…
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She doesn’t have a blog. She just wanted to see if she got any positive response. And she has so perhaps he will start a blog.
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I have no plans for a blog – life already has too much to do with too little time and energy. I’ll continue to send poems to ‘that little voice’ from my 25yr backlog of jottings and the new ones that tell me they need to be told.
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Thanks for sharing this.
It is very touching.
I talks of the body that loses its charm, integrity and energy.
It makes one feel bad and the mind gets disturbed.
It also reflects a bit of my Poem “..in this stupid” here is the link:
https://theshivasponder.wordpress.com/2015/09/13/in-this-stupid-body/
You may go through it and can ask Kathryn Moore Stucker to also read it.
Regards,
Shiva
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I have forwarded your comments to her. Thanks for your response.
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He has a different take on aging than I do. “My Body…” is humorous, abt the quirks and foibles of going from an athletic girl/woman to a stiff kneed 75yr old. Not abt losing charm and integrity. Not abt feeling bad and disturbed at all. My sense of humor may be unusual but my friends and I share such stories all the time – that keeps us alive and vital.
Kathy
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I love this and I can relate to it today with my one handed typing.
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What have I missed about your one-handed typing?
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Ms Stucker, thank you for submitting this vivid description of what we all hope for – just to reach the age of 75 is a win for most of us, regardless of the aches and pains.
Thank you, ‘that little voice’, for offering a platform to so many of us newbies.
I look forward to the next submission by Ms Stucker.
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