2004 · February · heartache · In Other Words Challenge

Heartache From a Hospital Bed

Here is my contribution to Patricia’s In Other Words Challenge with the prompt of Heartache. You will find more contributions at https://patriciasplace.me/2019/02/13/in-other-words-heartache/

Heartache set sail in February 2004 when

He celebrated his birthday from a hospital bed.

He celebrated our anniversary from a hospital bed.

He asked me “How will you eat” from a hospital bed.

He breathed his last and escaped that damn hospital bed.

 

 

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5 thoughts on “Heartache From a Hospital Bed

    1. Thanks for your request for feedback. Thought your writing was provoking and intense. i hae found that shorter pieces seem to be followed more, but that may just be the blogs I follow. My attention span may be shorter than others! The boxes of ‘thoughts’ was a good implementation, break-in up the verbiage and making it easy to read. Overall, think you are doing a great job!

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